2015년 11월 12일 목요일

Formal Essay #1 Rewrites





Hyunmin Sung

Prof. Kyle Brebner
IERW (03)
11 November 2015
Fall into Music, Flutter
If you see yourself right now, aren’t there something familiar in your ears? A music and earphone are our daily life. If you see Feign: Flutter, which is one of my favorite paintings, you can sympathize with what the artist is trying to say. This art was drawn by a Korean modern artist, Hyunjung Kim in 2013. She made different and various works of art under a title, “Feign Story,” and Flutter is one of them. In this essay, Flutter would be introduced through description, some background details, interpretation, and evaluation.
             As appreciating arts without any background information makes people think more, before depicting the details, the description would materialize the picture. A beautifully pigtailed girl wearing a purple, graceful Hanbok, which is Korean traditional clothes, is facing the side and wearing headphones with her eyes quietly closed. The white headphone is contemporary and famous one, branded “b” for ‘beats by dr.dre.’ On her head, six different, specially-looking animals are surrounding her in a semicircle. From the left, a purple hippopotamus is largely opening its mouth with lots of books; a black and white striped zebra with one green antler and the other one in red has put a pink eyeliner; a grey elephant has worn many colorful earrings on both its ears; a white polar bear wearing a Korean traditional hat, which a prince wore, carries a red grasshopper on its back; a pink squirrel with a black ribbon tie is eating something; and lastly an alligator with its mouth opened a little has a pretty colorful butterfly seat on its teeth.
             Based on the portrayal, to understand the art better, fine points that the artist wants to tell can largely be divided into two; total background and the specific art, Flutter. The big, outer frame of Flutter, “Story of Feign” shows informal everyday life with figures wearing Hanbok. The point that Hyunjung Kim intended here is a contradiction between “informal” life and the “elegant and secret” characteristic of Hanbok. She firstly draws a figure in the nude, and goes through the step of dressing the figure in Hanbok. She dyes thin Hanji, which is traditional Korean paper, in person to effectively express Hanbok in a ‘translucent’ way. This makes her message ‘one can see what is underneath the dress’ clearer. Under the theme, Flutter is the real picture I want to introduce. The motive came from Kim’s experience in everyday life. She loves to listen to music because she becomes stabilized emotionally, and can get intense energy while listening. She focused on the feeling of being in a different world as a main character in a movie as soon as she puts on earphones. As there are no restrictions in the world of imagination, infinite and limitless thoughts ignite people to heart plunge. What she believes is that music is more than mere auditory stimuli, and some powerful energy is made which takes her to certain spaces or connects to certain time. This touching and flutter feeling of music has connection with art in that art can also go beyond time and space through visual stimuli. She wishes people to be moved and fluttered by these works.[1]
             To add how I interpreted, Flutter seemed friendly but new, and at the same time gave me a chance to flash back. The combination of Hanbok and the headphone, which is a discriminative harmony of traditional and contemporary, and the peculiar animals around the girl’s head, which flashes on something imaginary, were interesting. She used familiar elements in a novel way. With this basic consideration in mind, I read the title of the piece and tried to puzzle them in my own way. I naturally knew that the girl is fluttering while hearing music as it drives her fantasy fly everywhere because I have experienced it. In addition, as people with their headphone or earphone on are the most common scenery from subways to airplanes, many people these days should also have went through. By appreciating music, they can gain energetic motives and healing while being in just one self’s secret area regardless of how the world goes around. This also can be enjoyed through an indirect experience by watching some music movies such as ‘Begin Again.’ In short, I thought it was familiar and fresh, and felt the similar way as the artist tried to speak; music has an immense power that moves people.
             Kim’s art is reflective of society and Korean but easy, which suits my artistic taste. Her overall works of art are reflective of our modern daily life so that all can sympathize and agree with it. People can feel what the girl in the picture is feeling. It is because most have experienced being in a totally disparate place, which might be free or exciting, while listening to the music regardless of places in their daily life. Furthermore, I sensed another allure in the touting of our heritage, Hanbok. The reason is not only the glamor that drums up worldwide attention but also the beautiful mind of Kim. As I like things that have a purpose to spread Korean culture and tradition, the presentation of our historical clothes through art is luring enough. This also promotes awareness intensively at the point that Kim is a modern artist. Besides, compared to other abstractive or overly subjective arts, her works are portrayed simple, frank, and straightforward. Therefore, it is easy to understand what the artist is trying to say. These demonstrate that implicit communication occurs between the artist and the spectator in her artworks.
             In conclusion, Flutter shows music contains an impressive power to let people’s fantasy run wild and throw people in a different place of ones’ own. The magnetic factors of the art come from reflecting and Korean but easy attributes. Considering the artistic point with our lives, as modern people have close association with music or arts, people should arrange their time to feel liveness sensing the flutter by appreciating them. Once a while, step out from the busy, stressful and competing society and concentrate on music deeply, not just enjoying and touching the next button. You all can be anyone in anyplace you want right now, just by plugging in earphone in your ears. Feel your heart and your own breath.
 
 

 

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  1. Nice job! You made some good improvements by correcting mistakes and clarifying some points.

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